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Comments and critiques are very welcome!

I think the pose is unflattering. Something seems unatural about the model's pose that makes her head look a little odd. Plus the lighting makes the lines on her forehead stand out little too much for a glamour/nude shot - at least for my taste.

Thank you for your comments Daniel!

Well it's in the eye of the beholder isn't it? The model really likes this image and so do i... But of course i appriciate your critiques! Any critique is good critique.

I think this is a very nice photo, I think the pose works just fine. BTW you have a lot of good photos in your portfolio, I love the black and whites.

Thank you Darien! Actually i'm just a beginner in this area so your words are really inspiring! :-)

Position of the face detracts significantly from what is otherwise a good photo.

Hmmm, I find the face position quite natural, although her eyes looking in that direction lead me to wonder "What is she looking at?" I prefer this image aesthetically to the other, although I find the other similar image in this folder more intellectually fascinating :-).