Spectator

I like the idea , but I'm not sure that the sepia tone does it for me. I like the composition of the lines in the shot.

I'm not sure where, but I feel like I've seen this before (not necessarily a criticism).

I think that I would have played a little more with the light streak through the upper part of the photo.

I know that this has a serious tone to it, but I think a little levity (in the form of a set of opera glasses in her hand) may have added something.

Just an opinion...

Then again, the opera glasses thing may be a little wierd for this...