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I like this. I like the simplicity of it, and the lighting. Well done. 6/6

So simple and beautiful. Good work!

Great light and textures with simplicity of elements. When we have a piece of our subject go right to the edge of the frame we have what has been identified as a 'tension point'. It's called that because it creates tension, and the eye has a hard time not being pulled to it, thus hampering the viewers eye from studying all of the nice light and texture on our subject. Too much negative space on the left does not help the eye stay in any longer either, I'd cut that back to where balance of dark/light would work better. Approx. 45% crop to really improve it at a fast appraisal. Blessings, MS