Contrasting Mood Between Sisters

Hi, I'm an novice in photography and Im 16 yrs.

I would like people to comment on this pic.

I am willing to listen in order to improve myself..........

THANKS!!!!!

Areas for improvement:

I can see sunlight in the background. It is generally not a good idea to place the subject in the shadows and have a sunlit background, unless you are playing with light and shade.

I understand what U mean, but this shot was a quick one and I did not have the time to compose it properly.

Anyway, now I learned something, THANKS......

The girl on the right has a great expression, You could have focused on the faces only and cropped the highlights behind and their arms..

It doesn't matter whether you are making snapshots or what. Just study the picture befor you click...

well, it was a natural expression