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Good camera angle on model, dynamic pose. But there's always room for improvement. The model needs more separation in terms of tonality from the back ground, perhaps some back and or side light. This would also help separate the hat. Your angle on the model is good but I think you could have framed the background differently.

pretty good composition, but too small imho.

picture needs to be bigger

Very interesting photos (this and all in your folder).