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Looking for constructive input. Thanks!

Good shot. The model and pose are good. The background is kind of distracting and uneventful. Maybe some fill flash (soft) and darken the background some. And don't have the horizon line through her head.

Darren, I've never shot fashion so weigh this accordingly. This one is nicely exposed and posed. In spite of the soft, flat, indirect lighting, it's textures are revealed as well as how the dress clings to the curves of her body. Could be improved by not having the horizon line through her head (slightly higher viewpoint to correct this or MUCH lower camera viewpoint to outline her against the sky [in both cases this may then require a longer focal length to minimize distortion]) Since the dress is the important element, including all of it would do it more justice. I'm thinking a woman might like to know how much lower it goes & what kind of shoes were chosen to go with it. Just some thoughts! Best, LM.

7/7 fabulous shot