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Love the texture on this. The black dress with the background works well together.

Can't decide if I like the expression on her face.. keep going back and forth on it.

Nice work :)

I love this shot and more particularly his diagonal effect! What do

you think about?

I really like how it is composed. I think I'd like it a bit better with less contrast, but love the diagonal effects...

The original have a better contrast (better high contrast precisely)! my scanner is very very bad, unfortunately!!!!

But in my mind, high contrast is a interessant particulary effect for this shot, it's give a unreal emotion with this diagonal light.

Excuse me for my poor english, I'm french!

PHIL

Philippe, you are going the right direction here. I love your contrasting soft & beautiful sitter against the hard & rough geometric looking stone steps. Her posting is just perfect! But truly, the rest of the frame is a bunch of busy visual junks--don't be offended, that's what I truly feel. Croping won't do it here. Perhaps if you have a chance to reshoot, I would get closer and shoot the siter and the beautiful stone stone steps behind / also must exclude the pipe in the corner too. May be a head and sholder or a half-body shot would do just fine. Good luck.

J'aime les photos qui provoque en moi un petit quelque chose de parfois indéfinissable. Celle-ci le fait très bien. À mon humble avis, cette photo -déjà excellente- aurait été encore plus réussie si le modèle n'avait pas levé la tête si haut. Bravo!