charodiez 0 Posted December 11, 2004 Es interesante Mauricio. Quizas creando una linea mas inclinanda, y dejando ver la figura? borrosa del fondo.. una persona? Link to comment
mauricio alcaraz carbia 0 Posted December 13, 2004 Correcto Charo: Una persona caminando sola por la playa. Link to comment
mauricio alcaraz carbia 0 Posted December 13, 2004 The blur back there is a lonely man walking on the beach. What do you think? Link to comment
justinblack 0 Posted December 13, 2004 Too much dead space at top. and visual flow isn't what it could be. Link to comment
doctorbabaguy 0 Posted December 14, 2004 This is a marvelous take. The diffuse space at the top gives an impression of waiting for a moment of sudden flight...the postures of the two birds are just right--ready to take flight... Link to comment
pepa_de_rivera1 0 Posted September 21, 2005 Me he encontrado de sopeton con esta maravilla. El contraste entres ese fndo tan sutil, la fragilidad de los pajaros y la verja tan agresiva, me parece total. Link to comment
cts 0 Posted December 4, 2005 I think the composition works because the two birds look at the right direction. If the left bird had looked towards the left, the picture wouldn't have been interesting.This said, if the right bird had looked at the left direction, I think it would have been even better ... But you hardly can control this !By the way, the empty space at the top doesn't bother me.Nice b&w tones. Link to comment
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