alexey_saveliev 0 Posted December 11, 2004 This is attempt to show mood of two old men Link to comment
lee_s.1 0 Posted December 11, 2004 This shot seems to lack two things. The contrast is very low here as it is just a very narrow range of grays without any whites and blacks in the 2 and 9 sector. Also, compositionally, this is not very strong. I feel that the head of the in focus man on the right is too close to the bottom of the frame and it looks uncomfortable. If you had the man on the left in focus and cropped so that it is just him in the frame, then you would have a more pleasing portrait. Always room for improvement, better luck next time and happy shooting :) Link to comment
ken_thalheimer 3,739 Posted December 11, 2004 These 2 guys are interesting. I think it needs the contrast bumped up. A little too flat Link to comment
alexey_saveliev 0 Posted December 11, 2004 yes, you true, but i would like to make old time touch of this work, but it's a pity i hadn't condition for crop Link to comment
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