darklights 0 Posted December 8, 2004 Good shot, too much lightning, colors are too toneless and flat. Link to comment
paulmast 0 Posted December 8, 2004 Remove the wreath, it just doesn't work. Good work at placement of the subjects though. Link to comment
jurek 0 Posted December 8, 2004 For me this picture could use more contrast. The man's "hair light" is a bit too strong. Whatever it is above their heads is distracting becasue it's incomplete or it's not all that obvious what it is, so it atracts attention. Man's left hand seems unnaturally twisted. Her chair is higher than his, giving the picture a tilted look. Woman's and boy's hands are too piled up, creating a large group. I am picking at your picture in order to help you. Please do not take it personally. In many ways it's a great picture. I like tthe choice of background color and pattern. And it helps that the folks are all good looking. Link to comment
phongkim 0 Posted December 9, 2004 Very good lighting! I would like to make mall suggestion: The light source on the right is a little too strong above his head; it may be alright if it was on the left because the lady has beautiful hair. Not many people would want to backlit their "gray" hair. Link to comment
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