"Call", 2001

Good use of light and shadow

This is pretty good, except that the breast stands out way too much. It fairly shouts, Hey, here's a breast! But the rest of the picture is more subtle and reserved.

 

Maybe you could have avoided it with a second softer light from the front, and turn the figure away from the primary light so the breast isn't highlighted by it.

Personally I like the dark in the picture but you are correct in the redirection of light. I thought somewhat about this context when naming the photograph...but decided upon using "Call" as the model got an obviously awaited and enjoyed ring on her cellphone.

A simple moment...