...twisted...

i would like to improve, but for that, i need you to give me a

constructive critique or advice.thnx

Well, for one, what IS it!?? It's slightly off-center and the reflection of you I assume you dont' want? Try setting up a sheet or similar above it, and shoot through a hole. That way, there won't be an obvious reflection of you...and you can easily photoshop out what you want.

Unique

first of all thank you for critique(my first) ;-)

about the photo: I admit it is litle off centred but I don't find that as big mistake, reflection of me is on purpouse, and I'm sorry you don't like that. what is it? well, it's always "The Sun"... I hope you like it