Fashion Portfolio

Try cropping out below top of window, and showing just your main subject. Could make for an interesting image.

Excellent 7,7

Fashion Portfolio

uhm... i think it is already an intresting image! one of the strangest and more claustrophobic fashion pics i have ever seen. THe girl must have been tall herself, taken this way, with (probably) a wide angle, makes her legs to bloom and she really seems gigantic. The window on the left may be disturbing, but could also provide a third bright spot diagonally aligned with girl's body and top right lamp, thus providing a key to understand (and overstimate) girl's height. To me is a very original image.

Sorry this one does not do anything for me. The girl is sexy enough, but the window, the paper on the cabinet, the back of the chair, the clutter on the counters and on the cabinets, and the light fixtures all, IMO, overshadow any creativity that went into the photo. Too much competing background stuff, small DOF would not help either. The girl deserves better.

I agree about all the clutter but I do like the pose, lighting and angle. Try to get maybe a clear wall as a background. Very original

My first thought is:

"Don't go into the light!!"

But pretty much agree with others comments.