Simone Test

Any suggestions for this image? The harder you are on this the

better I have at improving.

Beatutiful image, very eye-holding. Since you insist, I wish for enough more DOF to have her lips in sharper focus (I think they are the focal point, in this case), and it's a bit dark at the top. Both very minor quibbles.

Looks a bit soft, coming from that lens. Missed focus maybe? I don't like the overly bright light, but it is a competent effort otherwise.

Yea, I think you're right about the dark area at the top-left.

Will it look better if the hair that streaked across the bright light is removed? I find it kind of "scaring" the light. Juz my 5 cents worth.

Good shot.Cong.

Good crop and compostion, great model I like the hard background light; it suits the hard edge fashion look. As you want some hard critism perhaps the catchlights could be round rather than long like a cats eye and the top right hair seems a little confused.