michael grace 0 Posted November 17, 2004 Excellent work Frank, great composition and tonal scale Link to comment
douglas.hudson 0 Posted November 17, 2004 This shows potential, but I think you could have made the fence fill the frame more. It appears to curve quite nicely away, but you haven't taken advantage of this. Hope this helps, Doug Link to comment
frankb 1 Posted November 18, 2004 Douglas,Is this what you mean?http://www.fototime.com/%7BA6CA4FE5-22AC-4F76-ACBD-C44D02F99CAD%7D/picture.JPG Link to comment
douglas.hudson 0 Posted November 18, 2004 Thanks Frank, on reflection I actually think your original shot was more balanced than this crop. My suggestion was rather to experiment with different angles to use the repeating lines of the fence, and its attractive curve, in a more abstract and original way. Link to comment
Recommended Comments
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now