rua da sofia

critique and ratings welcome

try using different angles and levels, such as on top of one of the buildings, or through its window. i get the sense of there being a major void because what you have stuck in the center is negative space. the girls on the right are too far to the right. if you had taken it a few seconds earlier would have been better. the composition is off balance.

dear Vanessa,

The subject in this picture is that void you speak about.

Very well framed and composed .. I like the way the main personages are leading the frame and the continued life in the background ...