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Thoughts?

the left breast in shadow dosen't look right. the shadow makes it look concave rather than convex. otherwise the tones aren't bad. unusual pose.

An original approach of a nude female. Maybe the hands should have been the centre of sharpness ? (5/6)

hm interesting angle. Nice lighting. I, however, would crop the hand entirely. In fact, crop out the bottom half...basically where the arm on my right goes out of frame. Then darken the left arm a bit so the focus is more on the left breast and crotch area.

 

5/5

 

Alexis

 

 

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I don't know...I kind of like the hands...but this ain't bad.

 

 

This is an interesting shot, i like the hair in the shot, though it is possibly a bit too messy, which can clutter the shot. I think the alt crop doesn't work with the hair in the frame, as it becomes much too cluttered.

very very nice, I have another comment to do, because this picture is all about curves and lines I think I would have tried to "flatten " the hands and taken away the small disturbing nipple thing...but apart from that, this is mostly original and well worth good marks.

Here is what I had in mind above.

Hope it helps

 

Alexis

 

www.alexisneel.com