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Waterway 3


ivar olsen

Just before it got pitch black. Used a Maglite to get SOME light at the grass. Another shot, but similar to my Waterway 1 picture. My friend Aaron came with some constructive feedback that it looks better with some room at the right. I kind of have to agree... Ivar :-)-Indeed best viewed large. Comments and ratings are much appriciated. Ivar :-))


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My friend Aaron suggested to keep more space at the right.

I kind of have to agree...what do you think?

the upload of the other picture is here: http://www.photo.net/photodb/

photo?photo_id=2820180&size=lg

 

As usual.... best viewed large.

Thanks for taking time folks!!! :-))

 

Ivar

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Don't you think vertical shot would be more dynamic (the same direction as water flows)? If not (you've seen it) I like this version more - it has some kind of balance between this nice curve and plants. Just my two pieces... Regards!
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For me, the upper right corner is too dark and swallows the moss a little. Have you tried lightening this area and pulling out more of the blurry texture behind it?
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you have some fine new work ivar -this is my favourite - beautiful, atmospheric, dramatic, great contrast and colour too. well done!

 

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