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please don't shoot the women try to make a picture

Lose the hat Alexei. Don't lean on props is my advice, one has to make them integral or they add little. The hands don't seem to feel natural. The body twist definitely seems forced. The big patch on the jeans looks plain ugly. (Your last two have not been up to the previous batch). Too mannered maybe. Almost forced. Seaside doesn't add much as a backdrop unless you "use" the seashore as you have in the past, if I make my point.Maybe the sunsuit and the waves don't quite "click". And this one looks like a rush job, you tell me..So, take more time,(unless you don't click with this model)That can happen!. Composition doesnt grab me either. Hat,the title of the shot, as I said, actually seems a little out of place here and I like hats a lot of the time on the models.Plus: Rock in the way of the lower torso but that is small. Expression kind of forced and blah dont you feel?. Gut reaction even if it seems all negative andmaybe even unkind. But you have done considerably better Al, and you need to hear that too. Thanks for opportunity to comment. GS