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Thanks for any helpful advice.

The blown out highlights destroy this image for me. I am not familiar with the camera you're using. If possible you should bracket your exposure. Find at starting point and expose a couple of shots over and under it. Try to compose the image with something in it that you can you as a neutral tone. You can even use a grey card. This one I wouldn't include in my porfolio. Not trying to be harsh, but you other work is so much better than this.

Point well taken, William. Thanks for your input.