baby Son's Hand

Used 85mm with close up lens. Porta 800 and desaturated in

PhotoPaint. Does it work, how would you improve?? Thanks.

Simple suggestion (although would be a different photograph): show the baby's hand firmly gripping the little finger of an adults hand ?
Love it when baby's hold on like that.

I disagree with Dafyyd Owen because I think the picture of the baby holding an adult's thumb has been done. Not that they aren't very moving images, but yours is more original in that sense. The sleeve is a bit distracting though. Maybe shooting the bare hand would be more effective. Overall, I think it's lovely, really captures the delicacy of the child.