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Need rim lighting to separate her hair from the background

yep your right! i think that would look better.

comments please.

Very Good picture, well done James, congratulations!!!

Perhaps it's my monitor, but the contrast and saturation seem a tad off ... also, you may be trying to achieve an effect here. I really like the expression. Not sure what to say about the hidden eye. I don't mind ... some do.

By far your best in my opinion. Great pose!