I want more cheese

Please give me comments as I'm only young. Still got heaps to learn.

I want to hear from your wisdom. What do you think of the

compostion, the subject, and the overall look of the photo?

you mean spice (Dune)?

I like the idea of B&W here but the eyes bother me... they make him look eveil or alien like. I know this is a hard thing to prevent when using the flash but it is fixable.