One of my first black and white... The spider is way too much centered..

One of my first try with black and white... I know that it's a pretty

boring picture but.. I want advices! Help me!

Three things. First, there are bright things behind the web, wgich is confusing. Second, the background should be black, not this unpleasant grey: you didn't print it yourself, I guess. Bad labs often do that. Third, contrast might be improved: the web would be more visible. I hope this doesn't sound too harsh. Feel free to rate and comment my own stuff as well.

P.S. The centered spider works relatively well in that context; but sharpness coud be better. Maybe the autofocus hesitated between possible readings.

Merci pour les commentaires, très apprécier... Mon appareil est un relativement bon appareil, donc pas d'auto focus si tu vois ce que je veux dire... C'est moi qui a manqué le focus... Eh oui, pour ce qui est du studio ce n'est pas moi qui l'a développer, malheureusement... Comme tu dis j'aurais mis plus d'accent sur les contrastes... BTW, je pense m'inscrire dans un club de photo à Ste-Foy(Québec)