Madre

This shot is taken to a friend of mine sitting on a bench. I tried to

catch the exact moment in which the smoke, blowed by the wind, went

back to his face. I would like some comments regarding this photo and

what can be done to improve it.

It's always problematic to have a composition bisected horizontally like this. When I first viewed it I thought it was two photos placed together. I do like the idea behind the photo. It shows a reaching beyond the surface image. The other shots in your portfolio demonstrate that you have a sense for good framing. This shot seems to pit the two halves in competition for attention which I don't think was your intention.