Charlene

This shot was kind of a last minute thought before she got into the

limo to leave for the wedding ceremony. What do you think?

Nice, but needs more of a blurred background and more attention to details like not having that leaf run through the bottom of her dress.

nice! 7/7

the leaf doesn't bother me. she's stiff as a board, but then, trying to relax her was probably impossible. 5/7, for origionality.

Bob, Nice balance between the background lighting and the flash. You could have asked her to bend forward at the waist a little to give a more relaxed looking pose. Perhaps a partial solution lies in PS, by tilting the whole shot a bit to the right. A keeper in any case. Fine choice of film, it's low contrast allowing details throughout to be revealed. Best, LM.