The Wall

This is photo i took during one of visits to the countryside of the

state of West Bengal, India.

very good shot! 6/7

thanks Tina for liking the shot. it's the only critique i'v got so far for the only photograph i have posted. for some reason the site is not accepting the other photographs i have attempted to upload.

Very nice 6/5

Shamik, I think you could have shot the window itself, thi ssmall kid with the broken window can be a much better shot. The wall is not adding anything to this shot IMO.

Dear Suman...i kind of understand what you mean. But i included the wall primarily for two reasons: 1) for the intricate designs on it, 2) for the cracks in it and the way the little guy seem to be hemmed/walled in within those cracks. I had this little story going on in my mind when i clicked. Thanks so much for taking so much of interest in my folder. I hope to include a shot similar to what you desired for soon.

Just Lovely. The composition in my opinion is great, because all the space in the right gives room for the boy to look at and it tells lot of things. Great. :)

Very good. Simple but effective 6/6. Good contrast, good tonal range, interesting texture nice expression and fine composition

good work man..luv it

This is by far the most expressive and the most narrative picture i have come across on this site. It beats your village girl in a frame picture. Love the position of the the window (off to the side) and his eyes, and the composition of the shot as a whole. I would love to see a color version if u have one (from which you possibly desaturated ?). Its a great picture nonetheless, great story telling -- 8/7.