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What I like about this photo is the soft-focus head of the girl. Her expression is compelling in a longing way, especially with the side glance. If this were mine I'd try and crop out the rest of the image, and take her down to the slope of the shoulder, not enough to see more than the straps of the suit though. I guess, you need to do something about his head/hair. Perhaps some creative Photoshoping.

Maybe you can get her to pose again in similar light, and keep her similarly soft-focused.