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this photograph is taken in my attic. Lighting is the sun on gilded

reflectors.

The lighting is beautiful. The pose is natural looking, and the lack of real nudity is refreshing. Nice job!

Overall nice lighting but there is the matter of the placement of the left arm and hand. Notice how the subject's left hand snap around the leg and leaves a stump (line wise) on the subject. Also note that the foot and other hand drawn attention away from the subject's face. Again sharpness and detail are what the eye searches for in an image like this one. If the image was cropped just above the left arm it would have more energy focused on the face while retaining the triangle composition lines between the face, and folder arm and leg lines. Balance is restored. Eye contact with the viewer would not hurt either. But this is all a matter of personal tastes. Best of luck.

for your long critique.

sexy and charming, thoughtful - skin tone next to leather tone and fabric tone - I love it - well done

LOVE the lighting!

i like her face and mood