fashion shoot toronto

want to shoot more fashion...this is an image i created

recently....curious to hear some feedback???

I really like the overall symmetry of this shot. The lighting is atmospheric. What detracts for me is the light fixture that is nearly in contact with her head. This is worth a trip back! Best wishes.

Yeah...it looks like she's wearing some sort of wacky hat. I don't get the pose at all. Standing at attention with her shoes off? Get closer...the setting is cool, but that shouldn't take over the image if you're really trying to make this a fashion shot.