jenny_schr_der 0 Posted October 25, 2004 I want to improve - critique is more than welcome Link to comment
jessica_ulm3 2 Posted October 25, 2004 I would've opted for one main subject and the rest as a nice background. As is, your eye just leads to the wall at the far end without stopping anywhere. Definately like the foreground, middle ground, background layout. Maybe nicer in color, but switching is an awful big commitment in an ol' K (and I have a collection of rolls with '4' and '15' written on their tabs to prove it). I just wish there was something interesting on the middle path. Link to comment
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