Summer day

Summer day

I find the telephone poles in the background distracting.

I would like it better if you crop it so that it's all wheat and girl. No sky. No poles.

 

Soo Gooood ! Take off the electric equipment, put some details in the hair, and you get 7/7 :-)

Nice!

I think you may like it better cropped higher

(just below her left elbow)

Or maybe loose the white panties.

Very pretty girl, I like the farm girl thing......5/6

"And I shall love to listen to the wind in the wheat." The Fox. The poles behind her are power poles not telephone poles. That is why they lack in asthetic value. Personally I think that the poles drip with symbolism. JMHO. I am a better person for having viewed this shot and that is what counts.

The poles are fine in my opinion. It all seems fine except that to me her mouth/expression is strained and forced.

 

 

My only criticism is that I would crop the photo so the horizon and her panties aren't showing, accent the face more. Very good.

What telephone pole's???

I would crop the sky& the poles, and also from the bottom, to crop the panties, as Owl said.

Overall it's a good one.

Lose the telephone poles and you have a great shot.

What's wrong with the panties?

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I was thinking of something along these lines:

She is looking sweet, and naughty. I wonder Alexander how you got such excellent expressions from her in outdoor shoot.

if i were in your shoes i would put away my camera ... because of sexy place & sexy girl

I prefer the cropped version. Much stronger