M I R A G E

Are you dreaming?

 

No! A deiberately subtle picture. I am interested to know how the

image and title go together.

 

Your constructive comments and critiques are most welcome!

This is by far the best picture in your "Scantily Clad Girls" folder. Subtle, and very effective. Leaves the viewer wanting more, and is flattering to the subject. What a good picture should be.

Hi Allen,

 

I have just uploaded this picture and you have been quick to respond. When I take a picture I am hoping that at least one person will like it.... usually I am hoping it is the person in the photo. However, your comment echos my feeling exactly and that makes me very happy.

 

Thanks for looking.

Forgive me! I forgot the B & W version.

 

 

B&W is good, but I think the subtle tones play out better in color. Again, nice work.

Allen. Again thanks.

 

I like both.... but then I would.

 

Regards

 

Hey David. Nice image. I do like the direction that women's under garments have gone the last couple years... Definitely better to me in color.

Very subtle... good idea well executed. I like the B+W version also.

Kind words from you both. It is nice to know you like this image.

 

Thanks for looking.

Beautiful shot David - nice subtle image. I'm wondering how it would look in portrait vs landscape - maybe showing more leg? And is it mostly a PS manipulation>?

Well! You have given me something to think about. Maybe I will try what you suggest with a different model if I can find one.

 

There isn't much PS in this. I just upped the lightness. I am not good with PS.

 

Thanks for looking!

Beautiful my friend but it would do better without the fabric. This is a difficult type if image to pull off and you have done it well. The title works.

 

-Owen

is pretty and I like the peachy feel to it but..I have an itch to scratch. The waist band looks binding from the shadow which is really nothing but it makes me uncomfortable and it takes away from the fantasy/feel to it.

 

Knicki

Owen,

 

I am glad that you like this. I can understand your preference for this shot to be taken witout the fabric but with with the style of image here, I think it works best with the fabric. Having said that, I will show your comment to the model and she what she says.

 

As always, thanks for your comments.

Knicki,

 

I have to be honest and say I don't fully understand your comment. However, I do appreciate that you have taken the time to leave one.

 

Thanks for that.

rephrasing my comment. the waist band of the panty looks too tight- like its cutting into her waist and that is bothering me (cause damn I hate it when my panties cut into me). I was stating that I think its a shadow or how the waistband is made that is causing the effect and not that her panties are too tight.

 

yes, I know such a crazy issue but is what came up and as a female I went straight there.

 

Knicki

I understand now Knicki. I even see what you mean now. Maybe the problem would have disappeared if I had shot this in the manner that Owen would have preferred.

or if you just framed it lower.

 

my compliments to the model because that cut is hard to pull off.

 

 

This is really beautiful I hope it's your work

A zen mirage....

Praise means much more when it comes from a master.

I love this one

Tamara, if you like this, it must be good.

 

Thanks

love this...very sensual!

I am glad you like this. It is one I particularly like myself!