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Critique

This is a wonderful photo. The pose is really beautiful- I love the angles of the model's legs. And the lighting is very nice as well, especially on the legs and the little bit of hair. Also, it appears a slow shutter speed was used, as the hair seems to show some motion blur. I think this is a very nice detail. As a matter of personal taste, I'm not a big fan of super high contrast or diffusion (if that's what I'm seeing- there's a bit of a "glow" in places), but this image is strong enough to survive. I do think the model is a bit too low in the frame, and the knee on the bottom could use some breathing room. Anyway, I hope you find all of these somments constructive, and I'll end by repeating how striking this photo is.

Thank you very much for such a constructive critique! I agree with you. For me one of the bad thinks here is the hand on her tommy.I don't like it there but...my fault.

Regards

I'd like to see a bit more from the head. It's a bit strange like this, for me. Good... everything, in the rest.