Inverpolly

The Inverpolly reserve on a sunny Summers day is hard to beat. I was

pleased to find this sand bar at the end of the loch. It provides a

strong lead line for the eye to follow. Please feel free to have a

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An Unusual pattern of that landscape. well captured,good sharpness and colors. Pnina

Wonderful!!!!!!! 7/7

Like the reflection. Like the sweeping line on the left. I think I'd almost like it better if it were cropped halfway between the edge of the jutting rocks and the far shore. The right hand side doesn't do much for me and sort of takes away from the impact...

Solid composition and excellent lighting. Well don.

I would agree that the scenery on the left is stronger than the right but because of the sweep of the land I had to have something to act as the equivalent of a visual full stop, (the darkest chunk of land), lest your eye simply wanders out of the side of the frame without bouncing back and travelling across the mountain range. Hope that makes sense.

a great seascape!!!!!

Vry nice work. Regards.

This composition is perfect to my eyes...

Beautiful and very clean image! well done!

Not one of your stronger pieces...

But why David why. Every comment is valid but I would really like to know what it is about this image that is so much less enjoyable than others I have down loaded.

 

Ian Cameron.

Ian, overall this image, at least to me, lacks the pleasing aesthetics that is so characteristic of your work. Sometimes it's hard to define just what exactly is wrong. Here there really isn't anything 'wrong' -- your foreground has a pleasing leading line, compositionally everything is in place. No, I think for me the clump of rocks to which our eyes are led, is unsatisfying both in terms of the form and in the interest it holds. I certainly intend no disrespect by my words. You have one of the strongest landscape portfolios on this site. Your work gives me much pleasure. Regards

Thank you David, a very fair and reasoned response. I couldn't ask for anything more. Of course that doesn't necessarily mean I agree but if we all agreed I wouldn't ask for critique.

All the best Ian Cameron.