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intramuros

good light. nice model. good idea. i don't think this is framed as well as it should be. the focal point is a nipple almost dead center and the second is cut in half. The posture and the light make it look like there is no neck, so the body seems deformed. 5/5.

I disagree with the nipple comment- the left one could perhaps be cropped out to improve framing slightly (maybe show a little more on the right side to complete the line of the leg?), but overall I think the composition is great. The body is distorted wonderfully and the light is great. I don't mind the focal point being centered because the line of the body is strong enough to keep my eye moving through the frame.