Mona

Comments?

Apart from the fact that you've fit the medium to the subject very well here, you've also caught a great expression.

(On a separate note, I've used paper negs with pinhole and old 5x4" lenses, but not yet with a simple lens - I'll try it sometime.)

I understand the space on the right, but Im not sure that in this case I would have left it there. I love the technique, and would probably continue to experiment with composition taking as much time with that as I did with the technique itself. Good luck.

I think your composition is perfect. I love how you use this medium. I only have two things I might change: The loss of highlight detail in her nose and shadow detail in her eyes.

I think is perfect too.