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Very Expressive...

Nice tight crop and beautiful eyes. In fact you could perhaps afford to crop some off the bottom.

critique please

eyes are very expressive.. but too much forehead or too much veil. I wonder how a square or 4/3(Rag Format) would do for this image.. Giving either the forehead or the viel no more than a third of the frame. Btw.. u make her look gorgeous!!

i agree a tighter crop would work .. but i am still not sure how to rather how not to crop i will put up cropped version soon

Very nice. Those rivetting eyes are amazing, accentuated by your excellent compostition. I wish there was just a tad bit more light in the left eye to make it more even with the right eye. You can probably touch it up in PS. Just my 2 cents.

Very thought provoking, meaningful, expressive. Good job!