Trongsa man

This is another shot of man overlooking Trongsa valley. I love the

subject but I don't think I captured it quite right. I don't like

the glare off his nose and I wish I got one with a little less shadow

from the hat. The knot from his bag also interacts with his beard in

a strange way that I don't like. What would you have done

differently?

I believe you have your focus in slightly the wrong place. The focus seems to be on a collar instead of the man's face, and with that little of difference, you might want to lengthen your dof just a tad. Good luck.