An Australian vineyard, east of Melbourne

After a previous critique, this image has been revamped, let me know what you think.

Pesonal opinion,I would lose half the sky.What you have on the ground is pretty nice.

Didn't see the original - this is wonderful. However, I think the sky competes with the ground, which is fantastic with that light!

Excellent composition with magnificent colours.

Here's a try cropping the pic. Not too sure how much of the sky to loose, so I got rid of most of it. Let me know....

The small crop just makes for a vaguely pretty picture.

 

Keeping the high ranging sky creates an image of a light-filled sky vista, full of bright colours and an almost overwhelming view, highlighting the contrast with the colours below.

 

It presents the sky as wider than the timid land.

 

Peter