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Comments very welcome.

 

Does the shadows bother you ?

I like the photo, Mark and the shadow is all right with me. IMHO, the view from the window competes with the model for my attention, and could be blurred. Also her hands, very expressive in the other shots, here are a bit passive (especially the right one). What I like a lot are skin tones and the expression in her eyes.

No the shaddow doesn't bother me i think it adds to the shot. I do find the background very distracting though.

Yup, that is the other distraction. thanks.

I think the girl looks great and I like the shadow she is creating on the wall. However the background is too distracting and needs to be blurred or burnt out.