Sly Butterfly

Constructive critique please. Please don't kill with ratings without

comments.

Great light! The model's pose is almost expected but it's technically greatly executed. Congrats.

the obvious studio setup with the wrinkled sheet is the most distracting thing here. I think this shot would be better just about anywhere. gorgeous model, good pose.

I would shoot it again without the shoes :)

this picture could be more than what it is.

The lighting is good. my problem is with the backdrop. the gray just dulls the picture to much. She has a beautiful tan and it just seems lost on the "grey wrinkled sky"

My problem with this picture is simple - the lighting is good, the model is very preatty but the background needs to be worked on... the shadows behind the model and the wrinkeled cloth distracts alot...

Thanks for the comments. I too agree with the "background" issue, but it's the handicap that I was handed at the time. This shoot was also my very first attempt at "studio" work, and the concentration was on lighting and pose. I may try some PS work with this one, because she is definetly a beautiful young lady. Thanks again.