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Cristine (Portrait)


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Me gusta la pose, el encuadre y la tonalidad. Me voy de vacaciones ahora mismo hasta mediados de Julio, aunque seguire visitando Photo Net desde algun Cybercafe no pondre fotos hasta mi vuelta. Saludos.
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I'm not crazy about the background but it certainly is a very beautiful girl and a very good photo as usual.
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Highlights:- composition is more than fine, the pose is very good- - shows thew beauty of the model and atracts attention - really stylish; toniing- well - I do not know exactly - I would say it is in the middle - not rerally good but not bad either -

Bad points: - toning - well I think it is the only point IO am not sure of - well and maybe sharpnes -- - I would say it is a good photo but il lacks some element to be a perfect one

regards,

jk

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Pedro, this is a phenomenal portrait, but there is still room for improvement. Having you model off-center is good. It is often inadvisable to have the model facing to the near outside edge of the frame. Sometimes it guides the viewers eyes right out of the picture, but since she's not looking up, her placement and angle work here. That said, I do think that her figure is a little too close to the edge and I would try to leave a little more room to our left. There are also some distracting elements. The three or four spikes of black hair visible behind her back are troublesome. The portrait would have been cleaner had those been brushed and held aside. The second distracting element is the brightness of her hand on her shoulder. It is so white and bright that it almost appears as if the rest of the photograph was toned and the hand was missed. The brightness of her hand draws one's eye and, because it is an element of the picture toward the front, in the middle, her fingers seem disproportionately large. I think the photo would have been improved if her fingers were draped pointing backward, closer to her neck, rather than so prominently pointing almost toward the viewer. I like the downward gaze of her pose and her arms and elbows nicely augment the contours of light and shadow formed by her breasts. Very well done.
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Finely composed and very pretty pose. I particulary love this shot for its soft tones. Well done, congrats.
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Thanks for your advice, certainly those that we are not professional we commit enough errors, I thank for any commentary that serves me to improve. I had not observed the brightness of the hand until you commented it, I have not made any manipulation in the photo except the one transfer of color to monotone, the problem of the brightness must have the illumination in the study. Thanks you again and sorry for my english, I'm spanish.
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Thanks to all for seeing and commenting, I feel that your constructive commentaries cause that improves in my work
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Hay Pedro, I like this nude pritty much, nicely posisioned, fine skin tones, complex but good combining of body parts, interesting expression on her face. good. mike
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Strikingly artistic photo. I really like the placement of the model to the left. Unusual composition and very nice tones. The model is beautiful. Your english is good enough to express your thoughts.
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