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How to improve this shot ?

Dunno Sayan? I keep coming back to it. I like it and think it is well done. Captures his and her focus well. The background finishes the story.

Thanks Jim. Was wondering if the background was too busy.

It doesn't hurt that the girl sitting for the artist looks like Julia Roberts either.

Men doing the drawing, women getting drawn. Nice commentary.

I had missed this one... I believe there is a little more control of the highlights needed, but this is an excellent scene which you have captured so nicely. Delightful work, and the background in this case does not matter I think.