Transportation Coordinator, with his transit toys.

I took this image on my jobshadow a few months ago... Do I have the right idea - if not, how can I improve this? If you leave a low rating, PLEASE explain why! Thanks for looking,

 

/daniel

http://www.geocities.com/haydukphoto

4 4 June 22, 2004 M. Danger

4 4 June 22, 2004 Greg Rudakov

4 4 June 22, 2004 Nadav Havakook

4 4 June 22, 2004 Steve Sheppard

4 4 June 22, 2004 susan swartz

3 3 June 21, 2004 Andres Lopez

 

 

I am a 17 year old highschooler who is planning on going into photojournalism - please tell me how I can improve!! Thanks,

 

/daniel

http://www.geocities.com/haydukphoto/

Daniel, it's a good start. EVP's are for me the hardest part of photojournalism. Getting practice at it now will help you big time in the long run.

Thanks Scott...

I also fixed some problems with the image...

 

/daniel

http://www.geocities.com/haydukphoto