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This was my first time renting out a studio and hiring models to

advance my portfolio. Comments and suggestions are always appreciated.

nice. Hat is too big, that hat would fit a BIG man. The brim is a nice size, but the top is way big. I like to see this one in a vertical format as well, maybe 3/4 or full length, nice wide stance as well. Model seems to be turned ever so slightly to the models right. models left lapel needs to be pulled a little more open to show the same abount of breast on the left as the right.