Washington Wall

I like what you are trying to do here, but I think there are a few things that could improve it. First of all, did you use a graduated neutral density filter on the right? The right half of the frame darkens, and there is this dark cloud-like thing on the top that distracts. Anyway, I think this would be a stronger image if you cut out the ground and sky and left us with just the reflections of the people looking at or walking near the wall. A stitched panoramic could be really interesting. Also, the colors seem a bit washed. Perhaps a polarizing and warming filter would have improved your in-camera color saturation. A little post exposure work in PS might help some. Film choice might also be another factor in the color and what appears to be a bit of a grainy presentation. I hope these comments help.