Fireworks

... it appears woefully underexposed. Exposed properly, the blacks would be saturated. Unfortunately, the light probably didn't give you much to work with and pushing the film would have been the only solution.

Properly exposed, and perhaps framed a little differently to bring in a feeling of perspective, this would be a nice environmental portrait.

By the way, I gave this a 2 on the aesthetic side because the technical issues left it so wanting, but a 7 on the originality side because, exposure aside, it's a far better family snapshot than most.