Lauren A

Both the model and I agree that her lips look pretty damn delicious

in this shot.

I like moody and sensitive portraits. Lauren is a serious pose, but I wouldn't call it moody, or expressive of any strong inner feeling. That is highly subjective. It is a pleasant enough shot. You probably don't want to be nitpicked on the technical stuff because you can do that yourself. I can for my work. I have one photo I really think is "moody." This is it. Aloha. And oh yes,thanks for the opportunity to comment on Lauren in this public forum, fellow Bronicameister. (Sorry if I am not into numerical ratings. A pleasant shot. I am sure Luscious Lips Lauren likes same. (Worth ten feedbacks from photonetland rascals.) Please her, please yourself,first rule. Better than prom poses :-). Good luck and onward and upward...PS My 15 year old saw the photo and says I am out of touch, i.e. "that Lauren looks like a "Gothic" chicka." Oh well.

Jeremy, at the risk of seeming out of touch with your intentions here (fashion/glamour not being my forte')I would suggest you try a shot or two at your next session where her body is turned slightly away from the light & her head turned back toward the light. The camera height seems too high to me also. Best, LM.