myself i would some comments and not only ratings if someone give me 2 from tating i would know why! it'simple to give a bad rating but don't say why!

How about a comment with no rating? (don't much like ratings myself)

You've got a good concept here, and if this is a self portrait, you are more than forgiven for a less than perfect crop. What I would suggest, is either crop the breast out, leaving an implied nude, or next time, shoot a little wider, so that you can include the entire breast. This will also allow you to include more of your face.

Speaking of the face, the portrait modeling on the face is well done. The brightest part of a photograph always draws the eyes first, and this seems to be where you want the attention focused.

The only other comment I would make would be that your mouth seems a little stern for this shot. I think this shot might work better with a softer overall expression, and I'm not sure why, but I don't think that the expression on your mouth matches the expression in your eyes.

Overall, a good start.